CHAPTER 9 — WHAT YOU BECOME
The moon feels closer than it should.
It hangs low and swollen over Camp Magnolia, bright enough to cast shadows sharp as knives. The air hums, electric and restless, like the world is wound too tight.
I can feel it inside me.
Not pain—not exactly. Pressure. A pull beneath my skin, like my bones are remembering something they were never meant to know. Every sound is too loud. Every smell too vivid. The lake reeks of algae and rust and old things sleeping at the bottom. I can hear footsteps from cabins I can’t even see.
Patrick doesn’t leave my side.
He sits with me on the dock, knees drawn up, arm wrapped around my shoulders like he’s holding me together by force of will. His heart is steady. Mine isn’t.
“You don’t have to stay,” I say quietly.
“Yes, I do.”
“You’ve already chosen me,” I say. “You don’t have to choose this too.”
He turns to face me fully. His eyes are gold-flecked in the moonlight, fierce and terrified all at once.
“You don’t get to decide when I stop loving you.”
The words hit harder than the bite ever did.
I lean into him, breathing him in. Soap. Sweat. Pine. Home.
“If I turn,” I whisper, “and I can’t stop it—”
“I’ll stop it,” he says.
“And if you can’t?”
He presses his forehead to mine. “Then we run.”
The howls start again.
Closer than before.
Not a pack this time. One voice. Rough. Unstable. Furious.
Shane.
Patrick stiffens. “He’s not supposed to be this close.”
“He doesn’t know what he is,” I say. “Neither do I.”
The bushes at the edge of the clearing explode outward.
Shane emerges half-shifted, wrong in every way—too tall, limbs bending at strange angles, eyes glowing wild and red. Fur ripples across his arms and neck, then recedes again, like his body can’t decide what shape it wants.
He sees us and laughs.
A broken, awful sound.
“Look at you,” he says. “Playing house while the world burns.”
“Shane,” I say, standing despite Patrick’s grip. “You’re hurt.”
“You did this,” Shane snarls, pointing at Patrick. “Your kind did this.”
Patrick rises slowly, positioning himself between us. “I didn’t choose you.”
“No,” Shane snaps. “You chose him.”
Something snaps inside Shane’s face—jealousy, rage, grief twisting together until it’s unrecognizable.
“I saved you,” he says to me. “I took it into myself so you wouldn’t have to.”
“I never asked you to,” I say.
“You didn’t have to!” he screams. “You looked at him like he was worth dying for.”
Patrick growls low in his throat.
Shane laughs again. “See? He’s already gone.”
The moon crests higher.
Something pulls.
I double over, gasping as heat floods my veins. My hands shake violently. My vision sharpens until the world feels too bright, too sharp, like it might cut me open.
Patrick catches me. “Walter—look at me. Stay with me.”
“I’m trying,” I gasp. “I don’t know how much longer—”
Shane watches with something like satisfaction. “You feel it, don’t you? The wanting.”
I do.
And that’s the worst part.
Because beneath the fear, beneath the pain, there’s hunger. Power. Freedom.
I scream as my spine arches, bones cracking, skin burning like it’s splitting from the inside. Patrick roars in denial, holding me tighter even as I feel myself slipping.
“Stop,” he begs. “Please—”
“I can’t,” I sob. “Patrick, I can’t—”
Shane steps closer. “Let him go.”
Patrick bares his teeth. “Get away from him.”
“You don’t own him,” Shane sneers. “You never did.”
Patrick hesitates.
That hesitation costs him.
Shane lunges.
Patrick meets him head-on.
They crash together in a blur of teeth and fists and fury, rolling across the dirt in a storm of violence. I curl inward, clutching my head, screaming as my body burns and breaks and reforms again and again, never settling.
Blood sprays.
Bones crack.
The moon watches.
Somewhere deep inside me, something finishes waking up.
I rise to my knees, breath coming in harsh gasps. My hands—God, my hands—
They’re wrong.
Claws extend where my fingers should be, black and sharp and terrifying.
I stare at them in horror.
Patrick sees.
His eyes widen—not with fear, but with awe and grief and love all tangled together.
“Walter,” he whispers. “You’re still you.”
Shane sees too.
His smile is feral. “Welcome to the pack.”
I look between them—between the boy I love and the monster who wants me broken like him.
The woods howl in answer.
And I know, with devastating clarity, that whatever happens next will decide what I am forever.
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